Jun. 12th, 2021

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I came to this story off a post on reddit and instantly remembered reading Erosion as a teenager and liking it heaps.

That was enough to sky rocket my anticipation for what was essentially, a well written bodice ripping Separation!fic bonanza, if Separation fic is even a thing.

It wasn't until after reading both that I realised how similar the two were.

Hence that's why I plan to lump the two (amazingly well written stories) into the one post.

Similarities: There are large periods of M and S being apart and pining for each other. Explicit sex scenes upon their reunion(s). Similar descriptions that M has of S and vice versa.

Erosion has M and S separated due to an unknown event whereby, if they are together, their families will suffer. As a compromise, M devises a plan to meet S once a year on a secluded beach/private beach house where wild sex and heart breaking goodbye scenes ensue.

It took a good 2 hours to read it (admittedly I probably skimmed through a lot of it) -- until I made myself slow down and read the prose (which is beautiful, despite being a little gag worthy). The ending is very sad, beyond melancholic - which the author forewarns about needing tissues and the like but to be honest : I was eye rolling for the majority about this supposed "Reason for them to be apart" (unless you tell me the reason it just sounds like some made up thing) -
however the ending gets very realistic and beautiful.

But not tear worthy in my opinion.

Reading the author's warnings I almost thought it would be Cancerfic where Scully dies (although, not something my teenage memory remembered). -- and it's not.

I won't spoil it.

Then there was "Glass landscape" which a much more fleshed out storyline about colonisation.

It's dripping with beautiful prose (much like Erosion) however I think the storyline is better fleshed out and super descriptive.

It's much less vom worthy and I stayed up to read this one to completion. Another 2 hours. No skimming, because it was lovely.

Somehow my memory remembers Erosion as being my favourite -- considering I don't even remember Glass landscape(although I'm absolutely certain I did read it, considering my teenage attachment to AU and colonisation stories.

Now having read both, Glass landscape is definitely my favourite- same Annie Sewell-Jennings prose (I feel like I could sleuth it from a far now) with a fleshed out storyline where its not Separationfic for the sake of Separationfic.

Although that ending of Erosion is rather something....

Both are located: here

In reading these I was intending to look for and read Skin (as recommended in the reddit post), but actually, reading her stuff is a bit like eating a cadbury milk block and nothing else. My teeth hurt from all the bodice ripping beauty that is Dana Scully and the sexy hunk that is, Fox Mulder.

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